Wednesday, May 20, 2015

Pre-Workshop Peer Review: Isabel

1) The center of gravity seems to be the narration style. Specifically, how small seemingly random things appear in the story and how Díaz describes things through these small bits of information. Pretty much every point seems to lead back to how he uses small details to portray the story a certain way. You also seem to be saying that this is in place of just regular plain words to describe things.

2) I want to know more about what exactly does the reader get from Díaz doing this. You start to mention it at the end but you should expand on how the seemingly unimportant ideas actually end up defining Yunior as a character.

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