Wednesday, May 20, 2015

Pre-Workshop Peer Review: Gabriel

1) The center of gravity seems to be about how Díaz is portraying young Dominican men and their lives. Specifically, stereotypes that he portrays in the stories, and justifications for possible poor behaviors. Those are the big points you have, and you seem to be trying to say that that is what he is doing. I can tell you also use examples from the stories which show those, and everything revolves around that.

2) I want to know more about how exactly this relates to Díaz’s style and how he writes. How is what he is doing help others going through similar struggles, and how is this a style he uses? Also, the last paragraph seems really different and I want to know how it connects to the rest of it, it doesn’t connect at all right now.

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