Sunday, March 8, 2015

Bloodchild Formula + Leads



Leads are underlined

Claim: Octavia Butler is using tactics of de-familiarization and role-reversal to make readers feel uncomfortable and show how absurd our ideas of what normal is are.
Question: Why does the author of Bloodchild make us uncomfortable with normal things like childbirth?
Trouble: Bloodchild changes the context of things and makes normal things seem strange and crazy, which is weird and makes me feel a bit uncomfortable reading the story.
Status Quo: Stories normally don’t make the reader feel uncomfortable or nervous while reading it, they just have a nice story.

Reordered: Stories normally are just that, nice interesting stories that don’t make the reader feel nervous or uncomfortable. However, Octavia Butler changes the context of things and makes normal things seem strange, which makes the reader a bit uncomfortable. This makes me wonder how and why Butler does this with things like childbirth. It seems like Butler is using role-reversal and de-familiarizing to show how crazy what we think of as normal is.

Bloodchild Exploratory Draft


I'm interested in writing about how Bloodchild makes us feel uncomfortable through the way she describes sex and pregnancy. It makes me want to understand how exactly she accomplishes this, and more importantly why she did things like change the context of things or use role reversals to achieve this. One way to consider this is that she does it to show how absurd what we think of as normal is.
The world of Bloodchild is pretty similar to our universe, following the same rules. However, the story takes place on an alien world with aliens, the Tlic. The Tlic are aliens that reproduce by having the female Tlic impregnate animals, inserting their eggs so they can grow into grubs and feed off their flesh. When humans come from Earth, it leads to the female Tlic putting their children inside of humans, mostly men. This leads to a role reversal and causes the pregnancy to be de-familiarized. In addition, the way the grubs are taken out of the host in a painful way makes the birth seem strange, and gives an uncomfortable feeling. This is interesting because what is being described in a way to make the reader feel uncomfortable, is actually pretty normal and very similar to regular human reproduction, yet it makes it seem strange and unfamiliar despite being the same as something that really is familiar and seen as normal.
I’m not sure why the author would try to de-familiarize childbirth and pregnancy, and make it seem strange and uncomfortable. It seems like a pretty weird thing to do, normally stories don’t do that sort of thing. Maybe she is trying to say something about how crazy the stuff we normally forget about and think of as normal actually is. I’m not sure how that could be proven though, while there is evidence that it can make human reproduction seem very strange, I’m not sure how I can tell that it was the authors intent. The author makes the normal seem crazy.
First, the role reversal between men and women in this world shakes up our expectations even though it doesn’t really change much, it’s just the woman placing her children in the man instead of the other way around. Also it is described as having little grubs living and feeding off of the parent’s body, which could make people uncomfortable and weird them out, but that is basically normal human pregnancy and we accept that as normal. The process of taking the grubs out is described as a really painful experience, but again that is normal just described to be weird.

Tuesday, March 3, 2015

TOTSOTRDFRA Mini Text Exploration

Essay Proposal: Bloodchild

I'm interested in writing about how Bloodchild makes us feel uncomfortable through the way she describes sex and pregnancy. It makes me want to understand how exactly she accomplishes this, and more importantly why she did things like change the context of things or use role reversals to achieve this. One way to consider this is that she does it to show how absurd what we think of as normal is.

Monday, February 23, 2015

Bloodchild

 


Thursday, February 19, 2015

Thursday, February 5, 2015

Fall 2014 Narrative Reflection

I don't really have any questions about my narrative, it seems pretty self-explanatory to me.

Overall I think the grading was fair and I'm fine with what I got, but I definitely have lots of room for improvement. First of all, I need to actually go to the writing center, could improve on everything there. I will also schedule meetings to see Mr. Kiley a while in advance so I can get earlier help that I can apply for more of my writing (and so I don't end up going at 5:45 and walk home when it's dark and freezing cold). Also in the "time and effort" category I need to simply put more time into writing, looking over, and rewriting my essays, as well as the exploratory process. In my actual writing, I have to be more specific in what I say and focus more on one point, both in single paragraphs and in the whole essay overall. I also will get my paragraphs to flow better, and make them easier to read.