I don't really have any questions about my narrative, it seems pretty self-explanatory to me.
Overall I think the grading was fair and I'm fine with what I got, but I definitely have lots of room for improvement. First of all, I need to actually go to the writing center, could improve on everything there. I will also schedule meetings to see Mr. Kiley a while in advance so I can get earlier help that I can apply for more of my writing (and so I don't end up going at 5:45 and walk home when it's dark and freezing cold). Also in the "time and effort" category I need to simply put more time into writing, looking over, and rewriting my essays, as well as the exploratory process. In my actual writing, I have to be more specific in what I say and focus more on one point, both in single paragraphs and in the whole essay overall. I also will get my paragraphs to flow better, and make them easier to read.
Overall I think the grading was fair and I'm fine with what I got, but I definitely have lots of room for improvement. First of all, I need to actually go to the writing center, could improve on everything there. I will also schedule meetings to see Mr. Kiley a while in advance so I can get earlier help that I can apply for more of my writing (and so I don't end up going at 5:45 and walk home when it's dark and freezing cold). Also in the "time and effort" category I need to simply put more time into writing, looking over, and rewriting my essays, as well as the exploratory process. In my actual writing, I have to be more specific in what I say and focus more on one point, both in single paragraphs and in the whole essay overall. I also will get my paragraphs to flow better, and make them easier to read.
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